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November 24th, 2008 @12:41 pm  

Great marketing tips guys, thanks. Here are a few more that I have found to be helpful over the years.

1. Make Your Ad Look Like A News Article

David Ogilvy is considered by many to be the father of advertising. In his book “Ogilvy on Advertising”, he conducted studies that revealed that advertisements that include news produce better results. Ogilvy pioneered the idea of making advertisements that look like informative news articles.

2. The First Sentence Is The Most Important

The first line, immediately under your headline, is the most important line in your sales copy. The purpose of your first sentence is to interest your prospect enough that he continues to read your sales copy. You do this by tapping into your prospect’s emotions and then you create curiosity by hinting at your offer. A few examples of good first sentences:

“If you will give me just 30 minutes of your time a month, I will show you how to double your income in less than a year.”

“If I could show you how you can add 20 yards to your drive in just six swings, would you be interested?”

“If you are 40 pounds overweight, the odds are your life will be 15 years shorter.”

“What does Donald Trump do when he needs to close a real estate deal?”

3. Long Versus Short

Long sales letters have been proven to work better than short sales letters. Many website owners think that people do not have the time to read a long sales letter. This is simply not true and we know it is not true because many famous marketers have done tests on this subject time and time again. One such famous marketer is Claude Hopkins who writes:

Mail order advertising tells a complete story if the purpose is to make an immediate sale. You see no limitations there on amount of copy. The motto there is, “The more you tell the more you sell.” And it has never failed to prove out so in any test we know.

The famous direct mail copyrighter Ben Hart says that his 2 page letters perform better than his 1 page letters, and his 4 page letters perform better than his 2 page letters. He has even written sales letters that are more than 12 pages long!

There are two types of prospects: scanners and readers. Scanners do not have time to read everything and so they will scan your sales copy. Readers want to know everything they can about your product or service before becoming a buyer. What you need to do is to appeal to both types of prospects.

Your sales copy should have sub-headings throughout the text. Use the same rules for creating headlines to create your sub-headings. Your prospects who like to scan will jump from sub-heading to sub-heading while your prospects who want to find out everything they can about your product or service before making a decision will read your entire sales letter.

Another reason that long sales copy works better than short is that the search engines like longer copy. The longer your sales copy the more keyword phrases that will be generated for your web page and indexed in search engines. The more keyword phrases that your sales copy is indexed for in search engines, the more traffic that will be driven to your site.

4. Professional Polished Feel Versus Personal

Personal sales copy works the best. Strive to make your sales copy be as personal as possible. It should sound as if you are sitting on a couch talking with your best friend. Avoid the use of words like “I”, “we” or “us”. Replace these words with “you”. Use contractions, like doesn’t and can’t, to sound more personal.

People want to buy from people, not big nameless corporations. When I first began designing web sites for clients, my goal was to make the web site look as big as possible. I would use words like “we”, and “us” quite often. I found that when I made the sales copy seem like it came from a friend and replaced “we” and “us” with “you”, the sales copy performed better.

If you are a fan of the television show The Apprentice, you might recall the celebrity season where Gene Simmons wrote the following headline for Kodak, “It’s a Kodak World.”

Gene Simmons lost the competition and was fired by Donald Trump as well he should have. A common mistake newbies make when it comes to writing headlines and sales copy is to try and seem bigger to prospects. Bigger is not always better and this is especially true when it comes to writing sales copy. Gene Simmons would have done a much better job for Kodak had he used something more personal like, “My Kodak”.

Imagine if MySpace was instead named WorldSpace, UniverseSpace, or InfinitySpace. Imagine if YouTube was instead named WorldTube, UniverseTube, or InfinityTube. It is doubtful that either of these businesses would have ever grown to the size they are today.

As Fairfax Cone said, “There is no such thing as a Mass Mind. The Mass Audience is made up of individuals, and good advertising is written always from one person to another. When it is aimed at millions it rarely moves anyone.”

Ritu Said,
November 24th, 2008 @1:08 pm  

@Lance : WOW! Thanks for sharing some of your tips with us and MH readers. We appreciate you taking the time to get in depth on this subject. Once again, thank you!

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